ALL NOVEL Chapter 783 - What is written?
“Huh? How?” Hanyu, who had been paying attention to Kato Megumi’s expression, immediately raised his heart when he noticed that Kato Megumi’s expression had become a little subtle, and asked Kato Megumi about her feelings in anticipation and some worry. .
“Well… I feel pretty good…” After hearing Hanyu’s question, Megumi Kato immediately adjusted her expression, put on a gentle smile, and responded to Hanyu with a smile. However, no matter how much Megumi Kato pretended, as a woman who didn’t change much in her expression, the reluctant color on her face was immediately obvious to Hanyu.
So after seeing through Kato Ke’s white lie, Hanyu felt a little flustered and confused. He even continued to ask Kato Megumi a little bit unwillingly, wanting to know Kato Megumi’s specific views.
“So, what’s more specific? For example, which areas feel good and which areas can be improved.”
“Well… this… I don’t comment on this kind of thing…” Megumi Kato seemed very embarrassed about Hanyu’s request. Kasumigaoka Shiba, I hope Hanyu can go to a more professional person to get a more formal evaluation.
However, the Yamada Fairy and Kasumigaoka Shiwa have long been attracted by the interaction between Hanyu and Kato Ke, especially after discovering the embarrassment on Kato Ke’s face, they have something in their hearts. guess. And now seeing Kato Megumi in front of him seem to be dragging her two into the water, the fairy Yamada and Shiyu Kasumigaoka couldn’t help smirking in a very tacit understanding, and then said.
“Sister Kato, just say something casually, talk about your most direct feelings, do you think Hanyu’s writing is interesting and what attracts you?”
Compared to Yamada Fairy’s relatively polite words, Kasuga no Oka Shiyu’s words were very straightforward and rude. “If there is something wrong, just say it straight. There is no need to take care of Hanyu-kun’s face. He is not a three-year-old kid anymore. How is his script written, can he still not score 13 in his heart? So it is good or bad. , You don’t have to be polite.”
Listening to Kasugaoka Shiwa, Kato Megumi asked Kato Kee to directly say her poorly written instigation, Hanyu couldn’t help but smiled bitterly, and then looked at Kato Megumi with some anxiety. To be honest, because of Ke Kato’s reaction after reading the steps, Hanyu himself recalled what he had written, and found that it was indeed somewhat unsatisfactory. In desperation, Hanyu also nodded to Megumi Kato and motioned to him to be free.
“Well… then I’ll just say…” Kato Megumi also felt pressure under everyone’s gaze. In desperation, she had no choice but to bite the bullet, and looked at the script on the computer embarrassedly and continued. “In fact, I don’t know how to look at the game script to be more appropriate. And now I look at the script of Wang Jun, and I feel that the overall situation is still the same, but the level of fun I think needs to be strengthened a little bit.”
After hearing Kato Megumi’s comment, Hanyu looked at the ceiling helplessly. Because Kato Megumi’s evaluation, from a certain point of view, actually means that Hanyu’s script is boring. However, for this result, Hanyu himself does not want to be like this, but according to his daily contact with Kato Ke, the script on the computer is now the most interesting script written by Hanyu in accordance with Kato Ke’s usual temperament. .
However, even when Kato Megumi couldn’t agree with this situation to the greatest extent, Hanyu couldn’t help but feel a little bit disappointed and a little bit distressed.
“Hmm… can you show us?” Because they are busy with their respective duties, Yamada Fairy and Kasumigaoka Shiwa have not had the time to check each other’s scripts recently, so Hanyu’s current computer script just produced them also. Haven’t seen it yet.
It just so happened that the two of them were getting tired of the code, so I could take the opportunity to relax and find out what boring content Hanyu did.
So the two girls, one big and one little girl, just asked for a polite question, then took Hanyu’s computer, and then the two heads got together, and together they used professional eyes to check Hanyu’s script.
“Hmm… what do you think?” Seeing the two girls become a little weird after checking the script, and wondering if they were laughing with awkward expressions, Hanyu raised a little bit of hope in his heart. After all, Kato Megumi himself said that he didn’t know how to look at game scripts. If you switch to two relatively professional people, you may have a different view.
“Thirty points, out of one hundred.”
“Negative Ratings!”
Then the two girls did not take into account Hanyu’s “fragile” heart at all, and gave a rather bad evaluation relentlessly. Hanyu was shocked immediately, and Kato Kee, who was a bit embarrassed, comforted him there. Hanyu.
“It’s okay, if it’s not good, you can modify it again. Anyway, there is still time. And I personally think that Wang Jun’s writing is OK, maybe the fairies and Shiyu are more strict.”
Kato Megumi felt that if it were not for the part of the script that she had to read, Hanyu would not be criticized by Yamada Fairy and Kasumigaoka Shiba in front of everyone. Although this kind of thing is actually going to happen sooner or later, it can’t stop Megumi Kato’s heart from feeling a little bit of guilt towards Hanyu. And Hanyu also felt a little better in his heart because of Kato Megumi’s comfort.
It’s a pity that Hanyu just felt a little better, but Yamada Fairy and Kasumigaoka Shiwa ruthlessly trampled Hanyu’s slightly better fragile mind down, and they ran a few laps.
“Hanyu-kun, your steps are not bad to describe it, but very bad. If you hadn’t written Misaka Mikoto’s scripts and I read some of them before, I can’t believe that you wrote it? Although overall The language is very beautiful, and the words and sentences are also very helpful~www.mtlnovel.com~ But in terms of content, it is simply empty. Hanyu-kun.” Kasugaoka Shiwa pointed to the document on the computer screen, very unpleasant. The polite criticism made Hanyu feel very ashamed and lowered his head embarrassingly.
And this was not over yet, Kasumigaoka Shiyu said a bunch of things, and in the time of taking a breather, the fairy Yamada took the big stick criticizing Hanyu and continued.
“Hanyu-kun, you are very boring. The sections inside are very old-fashioned, and they have been used badly. Of course, it doesn’t mean that you can’t use those sections, but you’re a little bit new. Or maybe it’s a little bit more interesting. And you see…”
Halfway through, the fairy Yamada deliberately found an example in the file, turned the computer around and said to Hanyu, “Look at what you wrote about sister Kato. What kind of reaction is this?”
“Um…what’s wrong with this?” Hanyu followed the words of the fairy Yamada and looked at the contents of the computer. However, after reading it for a while, Hanyu thought for a while and felt that he did not write anything wrong. After all, based on his understanding of Kato Megumi, when he encountered the bridge section he designed, he wrote it quite in line with reality.
“What’s the matter?” But the fairy Yamada was very dissatisfied after hearing Hanyu’s answer. “Are you still a light novel writer? Sister Kato in your writing is not interesting enough. Isn’t Sister Kato such a boring person in your heart?”
“That…” As soon as Yamada Fairy’s voice fell, Kato Kee raised his hand embarrassedly, attracting everyone’s attention.
“Actually, if I really encounter something like that in the script, my reaction should be similar to that written by Wang Jun~www.mtlnovel.com~ and I need to find the latest chapter by myself? You are OUT, wechat follow the public account : Excellent reading literature or suduwx beauty editor to help you find a book! Really read the book and tease girls!