max McKnight In hell

Chapter 1: well hell



Max awoke with a headache and he saw Moline beside him looking worried.

Moline: thank God I was trying to get you to wake up you've been out for a while.

Max just put a hand on his face.

Max: what the hell happened.

Moline: well we were fighting a lost soul that has been causing disappearances and it opened a portal behind us and here we are.

Max uncovered his eyes and he saw lines in the sky that looks like a pentagram he got up off the floor and noticed that the air feels wrong and sort of corrupted

Moline: noticed it too the air feels off and I can tell we ain't in a territory I would have sensed it.

Max: let's just go on a higher view.

But before max could go heard a scream and he ran towards the direction with Moline following suit he made it towards an alleyway and he saw a lost soul or something like it with wings and another looked more like a mix of a lost and pure soul but from what he could see she was being attacked by the winged one and just when it was about to kill the woman max used his black arm to create a javelin and he threw it at the winged being it the makeshift javelin stuck the winged individual who max can no see is female from her figure and he noticed that the female with wings had bright yellow blood but he didn't think much of it.

Max: hey you okay?

Female demon: yes but how are you here humans aren't supposed to be in hell.

Max: hell this is hell?

F demon: yeah didn't you see the sky actually no why am I talking to you leaving me alone!

The woman ran off to an abandoned house but Jason was standing there with his arms crossed processing the information he learned.

Moline: so what do we do? If this is hell doesn't that mean you are dead big bro.

Max: if I was dead I would have been a spirit but I'm still in my human body and I can still feel a headache In my skull so yeah I'm alive maybe..... oh God damn it.

Max looked at the corpse of the woman who now he figured was an angel he realized to things he is in deep shit and he is trapped in another dimension.

Who you may ask simple there is zero records of heaven and hell existing in his world and lucifer and other characters in mythology were pure or lost souls that had been around until they died and that was reported by older spirits that had survived until the current Era and right now max is standing in a place that is supposed to be hell and he realized that he is stuck here until he figures out a way to go back home which if God for bit he will even find one.

Max just decided to leave the area so he tool of to the rooftops and parkoured his way through the buldings.

With Moline disappearing into the contract mark.

Max saw a shining tower that says extermination day ended and he saw the angels go through a portal he hid himself so he isn't spotted and once he saw the angels leave he saw down and he saw dead bodies of dead creatures who max figured were sinners thar were killed by the angels he honestly didn't know how to feel he was already used to a massacre but this was done by the ones who are supposed to be the good ones and they just killed in a brutal way judging by the wounds on the corpses.

He then heard a noise that came from the sky and he saw a fire ball that turned into fireworks he saw how sinners came outside and opened the windows and he also saw how some of these guys have more unique looking appearances.

He decided to check out this supposed hell he was expecting lava and rocks but all he sees is one big city with a pentagram and wierd looking people then again if they saw max he would be considered the wierd one

He jumped from bulding to buldings and for the big ones he made wings to reach taller buldings.

When he got a much better look at hell and it was big.

Moline: not gonna lie this is a beautiful sight

Max: yeah it is but.

Max saw a blimp with laser and guns he also saw below the blimp was a girl with messy hair and she had a bomb in her hand and she threw it making a crack in the blimps glass he honestly doesn't feel like fighting but he decided to just watch to see how this plays out

Moline: you aren't going to help?

Max: nah I'm curious to see this go down.

Meanwhile in a news station the princess of hell Charlie was getting ready for her passion project and beside her was her girlfriend vaggie.

Vaggie: so you remember what to say?

Charlie just gave a smile of confidence.

Charlie: yes let's do this.

Vaggie was still concerned and that made Charlie slumped.

Vaggie: you sure?

Charlie: vaggie I know what to say I just I don't make sound more exiting...wait what if i-

Vaggie: sing a song about it?

Charlie: you know I was gonna say that.

Vaggie: because I know but please don't sing this is serious.

Charlie: well you know I love expressing myself and goals through songs

Vaggie: yeah but life isn't a musical char

Charlie: fine but I have other ideas the highlighted bits are the best parts.

Charlie had a piece of paper and vaggie took it to see it

Vaggie: um Charlie this is all highlighted is this a drawing?

Charlie: yeah that's the happy ending everyone is happy and smiling in heaven.

Vaggie: It's not that simple but please remember the lines we went over.

Vaggie then grabbed Charlie by the shoulders and look at her girlfriend in the eyes.

Vaggie: and do not sing.

Charlie: fine I'll just resort impeccable improve skills.

Back with max he saw how the fight between the snake and the cyclops who he now knows as cherry bomb and sir pentious thanks to the news channels was turning in a war zone but then he saw a spider demon with four arms and looks feminine and he saw how cherri and the spider were interacting like old friends.

He then saw how the news came back and a blonde girl who was introduced herself as Charlie the princess of hell she was seated next to Katie who max didn't like was talking about how she is putting a hotel to rehabilitate sinners so that they can go to heaven max was religious but he honestly didn't think it was far of after he meet someone who he once thought was an enemy was an ally and had his back.

Then things took a turn were Charlie started to sing and max was somewhat cringing because he knew this is gonna backfire on Charlie and when she finished max could hear laughter from were he is despite the explosions.

Moline: that was never gonna well was it.

Max: nope but at least I know where to crash

Max got up and he decided explore more of hell

Got down to and alleyway and he put up his hood and he put his hands in his pockets and saw a sign that said welcome to imp city if max could remember rights imps in methodology are like the lowest demons in the terms of there the weakest of demons if this hell works like a city it's probably right to say thar imps are either treated badly or something else.

He saw a bulding that had white and black stripes horns and he wondered how the horns got there but then again it isn't the weird thing he had seen.

He decided to go to the happy hotel to get somewhere to stay.

When he got there he saw sir pentious's blimp and he saw Charlie and other people there he decided to just get it over with he coverd his arm with his back arm and he charged up a ball of spiritual energy and launched it at the blimp and when it made contact it exploded and sir pentious fell in front of him who is unconscious.

He left him there and he created wings to get on top of the bulding he landed on the rails and he saw how the group were surprised to see him max only said one thing.

Max: yo


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