Naruto: The Crimson Error

'Fuck, Just my luck' she thought while activating her Susanoo. 

A Pink giant humanoid suddenly appeared on the field and it had an axe that struck down the Rasen-shuriken. 

It clashed for a few seconds before the latter dispelled and exploded. 

Susanoo protected her from the small wind cuts that tried to attack her. 

'I need to find a way to use the chakra in that pouch or I am doomed' She thought and thought of a way to use that chakra. 

Meanwhile, Minato looked at the jutsu and instantly recognized it as a wind nature transformation of the Rasengan.

He looked at the newcomers and instantly felt one person in sage mode. 

'He feels familiar for some reason... that mode is definitely toad one, so he should be a contractor, but I don't remember any new contractors, did Sensei find another one... Have sensei aged?' Minato's eyes widened as he saw Jiraiya being aged along with the feeling the latter's chakra gave. 

He didn't even notice the red-headed kid with the two yet. 

The battlefield was at a standstill at the moment with no one moving as each was processing what move to do next and taking in new information. 

"Wait, Isn't that Fourth Hokage?" Naruto exclaimed. 

"Well, it seems so," Jiraiya said while fidgeting a bit. 

He did a side glance and saw Sora deadpanning at him. 'So, he knows... makes sense as he is 12 at the moment, so Naruto should be 18, I was planning to tell him myself in a few months, it seems he told Sora later' Jiraiya made his own deductions about information regarding Naruto's real parents. 

While Kushina was feeling shocked currently 'Did that brat not only copy my seal-system, but improve on it?' She now felt what other people felt when facing against her best friend's clan. 

Kushina being a grandmaster could already feel and exactly pinpoint how the current barrier is different from the previous one. 

Sora noticed her looking at her and somehow could guess her thoughts... so he brought one of his fingers near his right eye and pulled it down while showing his tongue. 

It was a mocking gesture that generally kids use. 

'This brat!' Kushina became angry and now not only her adamantine chains were floating, but her red hair too. 

Jiraiya noticed this and internally sighed. 

He was glad that Kushina and Sora never met before. 

It would have been disastrous, but this version of Sora he could see is more provocative and arrogant, unlike the innocent 6-year-old kid he saw before. 

He wonders about the current version of their time's Sora who should be 8 years old. 

'I hope he gets this personality later, I could already see my future self's pain' Jiraiya internally prayed that Sora would remain the innocent kid he is. 

Unfortunately, things rarely go as planned. 

Jiraiya then looked at the pink colossal chakra construct covering the lady. 

'She indeed is beautiful... and dangerous, what a terrifying combo' Jiraiya gulped

Sora looked away from Kushina and looked at the Uchiha lady who seemed to be confused. 

Sora was not the one to miss the opportunity to miss his enemy's uncertainty. 

He took a deep breath 'This is gonna take a load on my reserves'. 

Sora exhaled. 

'Shape-shifting: Ultima' He internally said the name of his jutsu. 

Kushina who had been marching towards Sora saw him taking a deep breath and then immediately disappearing. 

Minato who had been looking intently at his aged sensei and future son, saw a red blur in his periphery. 

If Naruto was not in sage mode, he would have thought that Sora was using a flying thunder god or some other space-time technique. 

It was purely physical, no-chakra-enhanced feat or more like beyond the limit of his shape-shifting jutsu. 

Uchiha lady who had been thinking of how to absorb the chakra in her pouch, immediately blinked and saw Sora in front of her out of the construct. 

She had Mangekyou, so she could see a blue ball of concentrated chakra -Rasengan making contact with the chakra construct. 

'Heck, even the wind superior form of this jutsu won't be able to penetrate my Susano, what do-' Her eyes widen as she sees Susano being pierced and the Rasengan straight heading towards her. 

'Not like this' She thought while Rasengan was mere inches away from her heart in slow motion

She could feel her life flashing before her eyes. 

"" Can't even use fire-release properly ""

"" Your chakra control is terrible, may as well give up becoming a ninja to prevent your eyes from being stolen ""

"" How dare you marry a Senju and have a child from that abomination? Are you out of your mind? Do you know how many of our kin have died due to those bastards? ""

"" I am sorry, but your baby is dead "" 

Uchiha lady felt her entire life playing in her mind and remembered the most painful parts. 

Her Mangekyou got redder and started spinning very fast. 

Sora, who had his Rasengan a few inches away from her heart, for the first time since he had seen her, felt a chill in his heart. 

It was a feeling he had not experienced in a long time. 

The feeling of death. 

Sora instinctively burst that Rasengan releasing some chakra to kill his momentum and then head backwards. 

He was mid-air during this.

In the next instant, a spatial distortion happened in front of Sora. 

He had backed away but, his hands were still near the point where a spatial distortion happened. 

Sora felt a push and immediately without hesitation released chakra from his right palm, so that his body tilted. 

He quickly released 3 water-style Rasengan from his right fingers, which was aimed at his left shoulder.

It got cleanly cut, Sora used that time to release a massive amount of chakra from the front part of the body and rocketed backwards. 

Jiraiya along with Minato and Kushina only saw Sora stretching out his fist towards the colossal chakra construct, and in the next instant, Sora rocketed backwards like a ragdoll along with that construct. 

Naruto who had been in Sage mode did notice a spatial distortion happening in space for a second. 

He wasn't able to perceive everything in that instant, but his face grimed as he noticed Sora missing one limb when he rocketed backwards. 

'Fuck, I almost died' Sora thought while tilting his body mid-air using chakra and slowing his momentum again till he landed in his original position. 

Susanoo crashed against the walls of the barrier with a loud voice reverberating, however, the eyes of the people beside Sora didn't even give that sound a glance. 

They all looked at the stump on his left hand which was unexpectedly not having blood flowing out due to a seal present on Sora's body or Sora actively controlling his chakra inside his body to stop it from going out. 

"It seems she has another ability of her Mangekyou Sharingan, able to distort space around her, normally due to my barrier, it shouldn't work, but she used considerably higher chakra to override that" Sora calmly said. 

As if he wasn't the person who had gotten his limb cut off a moment ago. 

It was like he wasn't being affected by pain. 

A third party would have thought that Sora was using a seal or some special medicine to feel numb to pain, but all 4 people present knew either wasn't the case. 

All 4 of them were at least kage level in strength, so they could identify that without a doubt. 

Kushina had appeared near Minato who was a few metres away from the trio. 

"What the fuck kid? Are you insane?" She instinctively said whatever came to her mind. 

Sora rubbed his chin with his right hand, seeming pondering the question. 

"No," He said shamelessly. 

People here could tell that he was lying, he didn't even believe his own words he said. 

Naruto who was about to reprimand Sora, instantly turned his head towards the Uchiha lady. 

Sora also focused his gaze on her and it became a frown. "How annoying lady, she's like a cockroach, always rising when we push her down" He weaved his hand seals while saying that and focusing.

The 4 adults - no 3 adults and a teenager who had been travelling with Jiraiya for more than a year took a pause. 

It was due to the phrasing of his words that they thought of something else. 

3 shadow clones formed around Sora, all 4 of Sora's looking at the adults with a judging stare "Perverts" 

'You were the one who phrased it like that while saying it, don't act like you are innocent' Jiraiya felt wrong, and so did the other 3, but they didn't like Jiriaya to voice his complaints. 

Naruto also made 3 shadow clones while asking "You could create perfectly normal clones with your only one hand?" He noticed that Sora's clones had 2 functional hands. 

"It appears so" 

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