That time I was reborn as a…

I messed up



So, some people have already caught on that there are quite a few things that I have messed up or just forgot to add. This is due to me jumping in without any real outline or anything like that. So I will be going through and doing a redo of the story, I am not abandoning the story. I just need to rework the story from the beginning. I unintentionally messed up one of the core ideas behind it and backed myself into a corner story wise.

What will be changing.

  1. Most of the start will be redone, it will have better pacing and overall feel.

  2. The lore will be redone to a degree.

  3. Stats, I am starting fresh with the whole system.

  4. The pacing and flow needs work.

  5. How I handled the family.

Overall, I am aiming for it to be a better experience for everyone. It needs a lot more polish and refining.

My goal is to have the start of it done today, I do need some feedback on how to do it though. The poll below will help me with that.


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